Housing shortages in the county, state, and nation.

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Melva attended a meeting by a non-profit where she gained this information.

– A lot of people have to pay more than 30% of their income for housing. Many are paying 50% of their income for housing. The people who serve our community, police officers, teachers, etc. are the people most cost-burdened. If you can’t pay for housing, you can’t go to the theatre or the movies. When we cannot afford extracurricular activities it affects other people’s careers (ex. The people who work at movie theatres.)
– Sb34b bill – concentrates on affordable housing. Cities need to also accommodate travel between housing developments. Many cities are creating apartment complexes.
– If families move around to find affordable housing, kids have to move from school to school. Elderly and special needs need places to live with facilities for supporting services. 61% of people in the US had to make at least one financial sacrifice. Skip bills, make one late, pay it next time, etc.
– What are some of the answers?
– The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-Day-Saints donates money to help the homeless communities. She imagines that other churches as a group try to find ways to feed the people in need. There is a community garden in Orem that helps people.
– Tax credit – if you build an apartment complex and you fill it with low-income individuals, you will get a tax credit.
– Vouchers – 1.5-year wait to get into housing. People get panicky. HUD only has 1000 vouchers per year.
– Melva invites the group to discuss how we might meet some of these challenges. The letters below represent names.
– When P lived in Japan, the apartment buildings were very tall and the apartments were very small. There were dividers in the apartments that could be open or closed depending on the time of day.
– j is working on a project related to this. She’s seen people create homes in metal storage containers. Earthships – sustainability for food, temperature, it works (check online). Trade work. Self-help seminars. She’s experienced these and it helped her catapult her life from where she came from.
– p – tiny home communities
– w – make it easy for people to build apartments in their homes and an easy way to evict them if there are any issues.
– We need to keep in mind the cleanliness of the area. The city should provide restroom facilities or provide dumpsters where things can be kept clean.
– j – Airbnb, looking for income-producing activities for families – side hustles/entrepreneurship. Have some of those jobs concentrate on these areas of needs.
– Which might be of the most profit? Each has its challenges and benefits.
– j – self-help seminars reach the masses. It provides a support system. Share job leads with each other.
– r – the major problem is the capitalistic system is pro-money-making. Land prices are outrageous. Zoning is also a problem. Provo has a person who spends all their time finding people who have Airbnb. The cities need to realize the Airbnb situation is good for both the homeowner and the individual renting.
– P – to enact change start showing up to city council meetings – citizenship. Start running for office.

Consensus – we can each vote three times. Voting by members. Narrowing down into a few choices. Places to concentrate our epic energy.

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The Sabbath is a day of gratitude and love

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Here are some notes I took from a church talk. Any misinformation is the fault of the note taker.

– In 1831: prayer and thanks should be directed heavenward.
– Commandment: thou shalt love the lord they god with all thy heart and all ty mind and
– Remember to give God thanks for your blessings.
– Song: when you are discouraged to think of what God has done and it will surprise you how much God has done.
– On the Sabbath, we have the opportunity to take the sacrament. We can feel forgiveness when we take the commandment. We can be cleansed from sin. When we feel gratitude for the things Christ has done we will feel his love.
– The Sabbath is a perfect time to remember the commitments we made at baptism.
– God will lead us along.
– We can begin today in private and public prayer to thank god for his blessings
– You can pray to ask the holy ghost to guide you and who to help
– Do your best day by day and know that the god knows you and loves you. You will find that your life has real meaning and your life can be filled with peace and joy.
– Those who abide with me won’t dwell in darkness.
– Joseph f smith: the pure simple gospel of Jesus Christ has been restored. We are responsible to maintain it here on the heart.
– Obedience to commandments helps us experience peace and joy.
– Loving God and loving our neighbor is the doctrine foundation of ministering.
– Learning and teaching the gospel in your family is an important way to find happiness.

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The Child Abuse Of Greta Thunberg

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Difference between bowel and bowl

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I consistently use the wrong word.
The Bowel is the intestine part of the body.
A Bowl is a deep dish.

Right now the only thing I can think of is that when you Eat, the food passes through the intestine or bowEls. We’ll see if that helps me remember.

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The beginner’s guide to self-editing Part C

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These are notes I took from a wonderful writing symposium called Life, the Universe, and Everything. We have a lot of talented people in Utah and visitors with a great deal of knowledge. Any Misinformation is the fault of the note taker. With the length of my notes, I will present this in three sections. This is part C.

Setting:
– A place needs to be constructed from the history of the city. Like Provo, what happened to create a city that is now in the story? History builds a sense of place.
– Your magic system needs to make system needs to have clear rules, needs to be consistent.
– Have a city on a different planet what is the atmospheres, gravity how have they evolved differently. What is the structure of buildings with that gravity?

Line editing:
– Should take place at the very end.
– Showing versus tell: Not all telling is bad.
– One cliché is to start the scene when a character prepares for the day.
– Use strong verbs and use specific details.
– Good books are characters that make hard choices and they have to face the consequences from those choices.
When it comes to trimming
– Dialog tags.
– Avoid adverbs (ly words) and hedging.
– If you have a lot of adverbs> look at the sentence to see what is causing their use.
– Hedging example: almost laughed.
– http://www.hemingwayapp.com/
Elementary excess:
– Crush word: there are words you used a lot like smiled. Do Ctr F and search the manuscript for their overuse. (Melva: use of ‘he’ in a paragraph can be an example).
– Omit redundancy he nodded in agreement. Blink her eyes. Shrugged his shoulder. Free gift.
– Consider your words cost 15 cents a word. That can motivate you to trim.
Active voice:
– Was and were examples of passive voice.
– Sticky sentences> is, as, the, that (look up Do a CTR F to find them. (google them)
– https://www.publicationcoach.com/sticky-words/
– https://www.publicationcoach.com/sticky-writing/
– Melva: make word macro to do a search for consistent issues with writing so can copy and paste new text into that word file.
– You can use a 5 cent word can be found rather than a $5 word. Can make it more accessible to the reader.
Tone:
– The tone is how your story feels. It may be conveyed by the environment of the scene. It’s constantly cloudy.
– It’s ok for your story tone to change.
– If you have multiple points of view characters it’s appropriate to have tone different as defined by that character.
Subtext:
– Is what is happening below the surface of the book.
– A character says one thing but feels another.
– Show a person who is traumatized. At the beginning of the story, their once clean house is now a mess and the person avoids decisions.
Voice:
– Pay attention to how people speak.
– Each uses different word choice.
– Worde choice can be influenced by the mood of the character.
– If a character changes from one scene to another then the reader needs to understand why they changed.
Other suggestions
– Maybe swap service for a service to get an editor’s help to avoid high cost.
– Punctuation: You are permitted only three! points per manuscript.
– Very conjunctions and tenses: May errors are consistent in your manuscripts. When you find it on one spot and look for it in other spots.
– For a flashback,> need to have a stimulant to trigger the flashback.
– Visually look at the book and look for blocks of text.
– Formatting: One space after a period and look for scene breaks.
Final pass:
– Read your book out loud. Microsoft word can read it out loud for you. Melva: maybe read a chapter a day and record it.
– If you trip over sentences you reader may trip over too.
– Microsoft Word can read your book to you.
– Read things out of order to look for mistakes, flow clarity.
– Give yourself time to edit a manuscript.
– Sensitivity readers: Send to LGBT friend (if you have an LGBT character in the story) to get feedback. It helps to avoid stereotypes. Have different genders read your book.
– Let your mind rest.
– Time is the best editor. You can gain insight.

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Club suggestions for Toastmasters

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Went to training for toastmasters and here are some of my notes.

– July club approves annual club budget and adjusts dues.
– Some funds used to attract new members. It gives a new member a sense of accomplishment. Old members will give their ribbons back.
– $2.50 new member packets. Allocate $30 for ribbons and name tags.
– Some clubs are very reactive and others are proactive. Keep track of inventory.
– ask for club fees. When ordering things. Treasurer orders supplies.
– The debit card from the bank is better to go. Not everyone needs a card. A fake card can be used on-line.
– Cash a check later: we charged more. And don’t get magazines soon.
– Don’t take credit card info on a piece of paper.
– Will have office pay club and then we will forward by debit card to pay for the membership fees. Some use pay pal.
– Get online to create an account. Some will have a long term member also signed on the club. They are used as your backdoor.
– As treasurer, you have the power to have a subcommittee to carry the same roles and responsibility as you. They can be trained to be future trainers.
– Use of Meetup is a new club expense.
– You have are accountable of funds. Keep good records. If have a meal that is over budget
– Ask for donations.
– The busiest time is membership drives.
– If have a private space may have to pay for a rental place.
– If use library> need to reserve a room in advance.
– Some clubs will approach a business and say be good for your staff. And then may continue meeting.
– Make sure have 3 officers in club president, VP and secretary signed up and updated on the website. 1. Can’t log in inactivated. 2. Lose all past members.
– A bunch of ribbons shows new members that the club is on top of it.
– Leave good notes, and sometimes your replacement treasurer will not read the notes.
– Limit the use of the debit account.
– Can ask to have checks to be printed. Keep track. To use the next numbers to keep checks in sequence.
– Take the laptop to the meeting to process payments.
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Prepared to obtain every needful thing

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Here are some notes I took from a church talk. Content influenced by from the strength of youth pamphlet.

– Q: What did you learn about the Savior and his gospel in your home?
– Our level of resilience is connected to our relationship with Christ.
– Joseph Smith as a child he learned about God from his family.
– We can’t borrow gospel light from others.
– Each latter-day saint needs to understand the purpose of god form themselves.
– What have you learned from the gospel?
– What do you want to learn for yourself?
– God has warned us of things to come. Prepare us if we will notice and respond.
– How to improve my capability of faith?
– How to address any apathy I have of the gospel?
– What can you do to accomplish your goal?
– Establish daily habits they help me be a better person.
– Have more sincere prayer.
– Seek other areas of gospel learning other than scriptures.
– Do geology long enough to bypass apathy and frustration to then come to love the work and fulfill my patriarchal blessing.
– Elder Bednor: some of you may be wondering if your gospel learning transfer to support home-centered… you may have questions on how these principles apply to you. (Paraphrase) Can we do this? Enabling blessings will flow and will be evident in your life. Your capacity will be increased. Compensating blessings will come when we fulfill our individual blessings.

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Amazing 2nd Amendment speech by Green Beret combat vet causes Democrat walkout,

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Spelling Sovereign

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Good: Sovereign
Bad: Soverin

I never noticed the word reign in sovereign before. A soveREIGN is a ruler who REIGNS over his people. Thus soveREIGN.

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The beginner’s guide to self-editing Part B

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These are notes I took from a wonderful writing symposium called Life, the Universe and Everything. We have a lot of talented people in Utah and visitors with a great deal of knowledge. Any Misinformation is the fault of the note taker. With the length of my notes, I will present this in three sections. This is part B.

Avoid clichés (like the plague – sorry couldn’t resist)
– A person looking in a mirror to get a description.
– Characters running 7 miles in one scene but does not show exercising behavior to keep in shape elsewhere in the book.
– Start and end chapters with waking up and going to sleep.
– Melva> fix pursued on this.
For shadow:
– Place the smoking gun on the mantle
– If you foreshadow something that will be introduced later in the story.
– If you planned to have a character to have an arc later in the book and it does happen then remove the info of that arc.
Characterization:
– Check the consistent accuracy of your character names.
– Watch characters names that look or sound the same.
– Every aspect of the story needs to be grounded in the characters, their baggage.
– Check the main character their baggage to makes them act a certain way that creates issues or provide a lack of tension.
– Need to have character likes and dislikes.
– Need to have hobbies and goals when they grow up mg or a place in the world.
– Check their world campus> what are their moods.
– If a point of view character can walk away from the problem the book then there is a problem with the book.
– Supporting characters may have an opposing goal to the character.
– Character voice: need to aim for consistency. A character is rough around the edges then later they talk in an educated voice is not consistent.
– Melva> some will read dialogs only for a certain character and they use specific word choice.
– Melva> some will color-code all the dialog of one character in a text and read-only that text to check for consistency of behavior, motivation and dialog patterns.
– Amplify Emotion: Provide contract examples> she was so sad she couldn’t breathe.
Dialog:
– Remember, provide info of a story for the reader on a need to know basis.
– To look if have a weakness of realistic dialog then hear a conversation.
– Your characters should have distinct voices that are influenced by their baggage and personality.
– All characters have filters.
– Dialog tag ‘said’ is just fine.
– Word choice can depict origin. One example is the word choice for British such as boot, trainers, and bloke.
– Use adverbs sparingly. i.e. ‘said excitedly’.
– https://www.writersdigest.com/editor-blogs/guide-to-literary-agents/subverting-adverbs-and-cliches
– https://grammargoddess.com/are-you-guilty-of-using-too-many-adverbs/

Tension:
– Need to face something they fear to obtain what they need.
– Scene> Gandalf falls, all attacks, crying time. Then after had a scene in on intense battle they chill a little in the elven city.
– If have tension on and off throughout the book.
– Authors often try to protect their character. After a bad situation, they are shown to have no physical repercussions of being physically or mentally hurt. Physical and physiological.
– The consequences are based on the level of the stakes to be achieved.
– Tension should come from multiple sources. Get hobbits to Mordor. Internal grieving thinking not good enough. The ring is eating his soul.

Pacing:
– Is the speed and rhythm of your novel. There should be a variety, an ebb, and flow. Fast and slow.
– Can tell if the pacing is slow with big blocks of text.
– Fast pacing: action scenes and dialog makes for fast reading.
– If pacing too slow. Look for shorter sentences. See how deeply emotionally connected to the character.
– Pacing too fast? A lot of dialog that goes too long. The reader is not getting a moment to observe the contents. Add bigger paragraphs and more emotional response showing body reactions to events.
– Engage emotion of reader what feel, see.
– Flashbacks can be effective but can slow down the pacing. And then the text to rebuild to momentum back when coming back to the present text of the book.

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