You’ve got to be kidding

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A speech at toastmasters.
Man, that’s hard. Have you ever done a project and wonder why you did it? Those who worked on the Toastmasters fall conference probably felt this. The committee was extremely happy with the results of the conference.
I’ve enjoyed the organization and labor by family members. Sometimes I’ll spend Labor Day weekend in Zion Nat’l park at a reunion. All the Giffords got together. There’s a skeet shoot, games, races, and popsicles. It is gratuitous even if you don’t participate in the races. The talent show is where one aunt sings the same song every year. “These boots are made for walking”.
Don’t forget the pot luck, sharing time with the secrets in childhood.
One of my favorite things is campfire singing. Close eyes and imagine the campfire. You could see the stars and the Milky Way. You can hear the fire crackle and the woodchips burn. Some of the cousins have great voices. We will be singing tonight. “She’ll be coming around the mountain” (all in unison).
When camping, it’s the only time you can have smoke in hair and clothes and you don’t care. “Puff the magic dragon”. Once the weekend is over, sing “take me home, country road”.
In the early years, our campsites didn’t have indoor plumbing. Wake up in the middle of the night and have to go to the bathroom. “a trip to the loo”. “Three old ladies stuck in the lavatory.” Family, fun, and friends. That’s what you get at the reunion. “This land is my land this is your land.”
People love these events. When you have a passion, volunteer.

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How do we strengthen the stakes of Zion?

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Here are some notes from a church talk. Any misinformation is the fault of the notetaker.

– Magnifying your callings
– We have challenges of being out of our comfort zone.
– Go the extra mile in your calling
– Concentrate our power from the sun/son with his help we can start a fire by blessing others’ lives.
– Seek out ways to invite the spirit.
– Act on your prompting of the spirit.
– See the advice of others who have experience.
– Humble yourself
– Be teachable
– Isiah 54:13-14, 17: thy children shall be taught by the Lord.
– Isiah65:17-20

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To Ourselves and Our Posterity

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A presentation by Stephen Pratt.

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Spelling Conquered

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I consistently have issues with this word.

Good: conquered
Bad: concored

We’ll see if this will work. The knights of England went to the holy land on a QUEst to win back the land. They took turns conQUEred their enemy and the enemy took turns conQUEring them.

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Generating ideas

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These are notes I took from a wonderful writing symposium called Life, the Universe, and Everything. We have a lot of talented people in Utah and visitors with a great deal of knowledge. Any Misinformation is the fault of the note taker.

– One writing teacher has a writing practice called 100. Each week, the student create a hundred first lines of stories you would want to read. Do it every week. Gives source material when you get stuck.
– Every story can start a lot of different ways.
– Train yourself to get ideas and write them down. Training your subconscious to keep a lookout.
– The more you let your mind wander or let your mind wander can come up with ideas.
– If an idea can stick with me for one or two weeks it may not be very good.
– Come up with a great idea and execute it. I.e. Bear discovers fire.
– What stops you from writing is not the lack of ideas what stops you is the lack of self-confidence.

Q: what do you do to practice to stretch your abilities?
– Love writing prompts.
– Go to submission grinder: looking for stories to get a theme. They have a general tone.
– Being in a place of curiosity and wonder can harvest ideas.
– There are things that are important to you.
– If you got an idea that is cool. And tell the idea to three friends and tell friends and see how three people respond. Read the first two pages of a story to a writing group. You can tell they like it by them telling you how to create the word.
– Put up a wall of fame of past success (awards, fan letters, etc.) To put on your wall to be used as encouragements.

Q: how tell if an idea is bad?
– Am I still excited about it after a month?
– If something starts getting old to you, as the creator, then question it.

Q: Killing your darlings
– Kill ideas you think your audience wants but they don’t. Admit a mistake and fix a mistake.

Q: What are some structures to put in place for you to weed out ideas? Or how long spent on them b before pushing to the side?
– For NANO (https://nanowrimo.org/ ). ask what is the most interesting thing that will hold my interest for the next year of writing. Am I the person who should be writing this?
– The process for a novel is slow. Have to think about and throw ideas into a box. For short stories start in a flash and have a good sense of what the story wants to do.
– Coming up ideas happen when you are doing research, or traveling, or reading articles. Get out of your box.
– While doing revision and a part is not working? How to fix new parts of an existing story?
– One will have a friend who can act as a sounding board. Has a whole new different who can give your ideas.
– Draft 0 is the long head manuscript. Use a lot of post-it notes. Read out loud and read the story out loud. Ideas bubble up and you write down those new perceptions. Then review those post-it notes and sees which ones should be acted upon.
– Switching the medium and use a different technology or location. Change the font or place you sit. Handwrite your text.

Q: what Personal habits help you create?
– Fill your creative tanks. Be present of empathy with others. Can’t care about the characters around you.
– Reading all kinds of things. Read material out of your comfort zones.
– Looking at art as a source of writing.
Q; what emotions influence your ability to create.
– Grief and deprecations are big ones
– Dave Farland got pissed at an editor and couldn’t finish the last book of rune Lords.
– What influences the path of a story?
– Stories are about characters not ideas.
– Talk to your characters can direct a path
– Some ideas come back to haunt you.
– What ending note do you want the story the end with?

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Dream in 3D

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This is a speech at one of our toastmasters’ meetings.

Have you ever said, “I’ve always dreamed about going…doing…”. A guy can dream, can’t he?
What is the dream you’ve always had?
You can achieve your dreams if you follow the 3D formula. Decide. You must decide which dreams to follow. Decide comes from two words. De-take away. Cide – cut away. You cut away options, leaving you with one path. Decide on one dream.
2nd D is design. Designing your dream gives it its full body. Know every angle and aspects of the dream. How big is it? What color, smell, sound, weight, and how will it make you feel? Designing dream, envisioning it gives it power and makes it real. Spend that time designing it and start from beginning all the way to the end. Design in fine detail. My dream is an island vacation. It might start the day you go to the airport or seaport. When you get to the island and go to the ocean and the water laps against your feet. Feel the sand beneath toes. Breeze tousle s your hair and brings the smell of ocean. Sun kisses your shoulders.
The 3rd D is dedication. Imagine being a soldier of Tariq Bin Ziad. He leads you and 7000 of your best friends to the city of Tangiers. Board ships and sail across the Mediterranean ocean to Spain to conquest. Onshore is general Tariq. He waits until the last ship comes to shore and everyone is on the beach. He says, “burn the ships.” He tells them they will conquer or perish. That is dedication. If you have that kind of dedication, you will succeed.
He had a dream. He was 265 pounds. The weight started messing with his health. He tried to lose weight. He designed what he wanted to look like. His dream didn’t happen. Had the threat of losing limbs, organs, and even death didn’t compel him to fulfill dream. When he dedicated himself to dream, he slimmed down.
Dreams can come true. Your dreams are valid. Decide on a dream. Design in fine detail, your dream. Dedicate yourself to your dream. William Francis Murry – whatever you can do to begin your dream, do it.

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Honoring fathers and mothers

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Here are some notes I took from a church talk. Any misinformation is the fault of the note taker.

– God created his children in his image.
– Loves us even with our faults
– In Exodus are the Ten Commandments. 1-4 involve relationships with God the rest are relationships with others. 5th commandments encompass both
– The first commandment includes a blessing with it. We are promised a long life.
– What does it mean to honor fathers and mothers> honor comes from Hebrew word related to weighty. It could be a healthy relationship with our parents.
– Parents brought us into the world.
– Are your parents a high priority in your life?
– Besides relationships with our Earthly parents, we need to consider our heavenly parents.
– One way to honor is the nurture feelings of gratitude.
– Parents are imperfect and we need to forgive them. We need to nurture feelings of gratitude.
– Not expressing gratitude to parents is like wrapping a present and not giving it.
– The way to honor parents is to value the life they gave us and to value the counsel they give us a family.
– Parents know us best. Parents are wiser from life’s experience.
– What we become is often from what we receive from our parents.
– We should seek our parents’ counsel as we can. How are we receiving it?
– We also need to see God’s counsel. How do we respond to it?
– What we do is very relate3d to what we become.
– Our parents want to become better than their parents. Emulate their best characteristics and achieve their highest aspirations.
– Are we striving to perpetuate all the things that are good for our parents? Don’t want to give our parents the reason to feel ashamed.
– Honor included attending to our parent’s physical needs as they get older. They have devoted their finances to our help while growing up.
– Christ: one of his final acts was for John to take Christ’s mother into his home.
– Elder Oaks: allow aging parents to live independently as long as they can. Have parents live with their kids rather than a rest home. The last resort is to send home to assistant living. It takes care of physical but family needs to provide emotional support and other needs.
– If you honor your parents, love them, express appreciation. Do this by following their commandments.

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Ukraine: The Democrats’ Russia

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I recommend this video

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Spelling Coincidence

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Spelling Coincidence

Good: coincidence
Bad: coristence

COINcidence is when something rare happens such as flipping a COIN three times and getting the same results. It is COINcidence.

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Writing Gracefully: Saying it with few words

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These are notes I took from a wonderful writing symposium called Life, the Universe, and Everything. We have a lot of talented people in Utah and visitors with a great deal of knowledge. Any Misinformation is the fault of the note taker.

– What tools do you use to start deciding how to tell it?
– Short fiction is like the Olympics. You can watch everything about the Olympics. From preparation, the event, and after the show an exit interview. That’s a novel. Short fiction YouTube watched the flipping event. Think about what the core or nugget is of the story. First three sentences where we are, who we are with and something on the genre.
– What is our conflict and how to get the character to that conflict? The amount of conflict to a goal will determine the length.
– As a discovery writer will just start writing. What if a mermaid lives on land and discovers she is a mermaid.
– When writing a story an idea will divert the story in a different direction.
– Some writers do that and then need to incorporate that subplot into the story.
– Some write an outline and then things will change the idea and the writer will change their outline to cater to the new idea.
– The outline is used to hold parts of the story that won’t hold in your memory.
– First 13 sentences have the first conflict. Shows half a page. The sooner the conflict the faster-paced the story feels. Must have the conflict.
Q: how to use words for the plot, conflict.
– Setup of the story to be in the first paragraph. Who is the character, what their conflict is, or what happens they are not expecting?
– Try to nail the tone in the first to second paragraphs.
– Try to not put everything in. You need to leave a mystery to turn the page.
– Try to have a character interact with the environments around them. Show emotional response illustrated by how interacting with the room.
– Description through action. What are they doing? Make sure you are in the head of your character.
– Action driven opening: character doing something
– Voice drive opening is driven by the narrative voice. Using rich language that reflects the tonal quality of the character.
– It was the silence of three parts> beginning of a story. Name of the wind first line.
– https://www.reddit.com/r/KingkillerChronicle/comments/7tv0gn/what_is_the_silence_of_three_partsspoilers_all/ –
– The first line is to give an insight into the character. Steel heart by Brandon Sanderson example: I’ve seen steal heart bleed.
– Beginning voyage of the Don Tredder. (I may be wrong)There was a boy and he almost deserved it.
– If you were a dinosaur, my love, you would be a T Rex.
– Favorite opening: Larry >monster hunter > he the chance to live the American dream. He was able to throw his boss off a 14-floor window.
– Don’t want the opening to be overly wordy. You want to have a word appropriate to convey the message.
Q: how make the promised made by the opening line is fulfilled by the end of the story/ book?
– Start with something very powerful. Carry snarky character and based on personal8iyt want to carry that personality through and explore that character. Write it and then review it to see how to character developed.
– Flash fiction: like when an author can take the first sentence and reference that line at the end of the story. The word does double duty. The beginning has more meaning when reading the end.
– James Bond opens the scene with action and using technology used to help on his mission. You need to think of the kinds of conflict.
– When something is sagging> how did you know?
– Critique partners can help find sagging spots.
– When coming to those parts > need to increase the tension or increase the conflict between characters. The sagging moment can be caused because everyone is getting along.
– The fastest way to find out something is slow is when you get bored.
– Read the scene and see if skimming or feel drowsy, there may not be a reason to care about the character.
– Each chapter needs to have its own plotline or objective and climax to keep the story moving along. Do this by having each chapter ends with a cliff hanger.
– For discovery writers. Nancy crest will junk the entire manuscript and will write it over again. Takes the first draft to figure out what the story is about.
– Started writing a book using Namo. https://nanowrimo.org/
– Need to know what needs to be done for a certain beat. Then revise it to fix plot holes, and another revision to deepen the characters. Four reviews to make the text be pretty.
Tools to fix overwritten?
– 10% of techniques cut pros by 10%. 100 words cut by ten words. It forces you to concentrate on what words are important. She walked away when revised, could be: she retreated.
– Another technique is one sentence for a concept. Look at a long test highlight the concepts that you just have or the story will break. And then pull out the essentials can help in certain sections of the book.
– For short stories and looking at short story calls and have word count guidelines. To submit have to put down the text to fit their guidelines.
Use of tension
– Tension does not have to be a fight. It can be internal where someone has to make a choice. Or someone is put into a situation where they are not comfortable with.
– Big fan to giving the readers a chance to rest. You need landings in the stairs to give the person a chance to rest. Notice the things in the beginning. Put rest spots in the middle of the chapter.
Q: How does the nature of your revisions change based on what portion of the book.
– There is more drinking at the end of the book.
– Do a large structure pass first. Make notes where changes need to be made so it doesn’t shift the focus of the book.
– Want to be tighter at the end of the story for tension and pacing.
– After writing a book sketch out the outline to see what are the high points, which area sages, or where are too many intense scenes?

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