The Punic Wars: cultural causes and effects

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These are notes I took from a wonderful writing symposium called Life, the Universe and Everything. We have a lot of talented people in Utah and visitors with a great deal of knowledge. Any Misinformation is the fault of the note taker.

– Rome and cartridge conflict: both interested in cicely and Greek colonies and trade with them.
– Rome was a land power
– And cartridge has a great naval fleet.
– Trade wars often change info physical war.
– Cartridge was a Nexis for trade with 300K people. It was the first city with apartments and a working sewage system. They had a huge amount of commercial trade.
– Cartridge also a Nexis for the intellectual.
Three wars: how come about.
– Empires are very jealous of their power trade or physical empire. Fight for the dominion of cicely (adjustment to Italy)
– Cecily center of the meditration. So when Rome started expanding they moved into cartridge and cartridge said no.
– Cartridge had a ship that ram into a ship. Rome duplicated the ships.
– Rome has a nation of citizen shoulders and are personally invested.
– Kato leader fought in the 3rd war:
– Hanable crossing the Alps with elephants.
– Fabious invented Fabien tactics just don’t get beaten. Hideout in the mud/swamps. Was constant a threat to Hanable. Can prevent the bigger army to do things because they pose a constant threat.
– Hannibal considered the greatest military general in history. Build massive rafts with dirt and grass to not frighten the elephants. Builds hundreds of rafts in 9 days.
– To get Elephants across the Alps by breaking up boulders.
– Arcemeties is a great inventor of battle items.
– Greek achievements become part of western civilization
– Roman law became an important part of western culture.
– Melva Story of saving Arcemeties.
– Salted the earth around catheridge to make it infertile.

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Are you careful or causal

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Here are some notes from a church meeting. Any inaccuracies are the fault of the note taker.

– President Kimball said: wish we could more effective and put in standing in the church if a person is old enough to be a mission they are old enough to be a missionary.
– We receive blessing from the gospel and we share the gospel to others.
– Members are the people who include investigators into the ward.
– Member work is the secret of success
– Members need to find people and find someone to lead to the gospel.
– There is a spiritual adventure in the work.
– Sharing the gospel brings peace and joy in our own lives.
– Missionary work strengthens our own faith.
– We will receive help from the other side of the veil.
– Our sins will be forgiven more readily as we bring more people to Christ.
– Are we complacent in our efforts to teach the gospel?
– Call from the lord or seldom convenient.
– Do we faithfully accept the callings from our leaders?
– Do we let God save us?
– D&C:97:8
– Working hard to keep our convenient is difficult.
– The world is laden with distractions.
– Moroni 10:32 become perfect in Christ.
– Don’t be critical of others walking along their path. God is the judge, not us.
– Matt 7:2-5: you shall be judged by cast out the beam of thy own eye.
– It is Christ job to judge and our job to love.
– Though we are not perfect we can be worthy for the sacrament, temple and receive revelation.
– Christ asks us to be worthy.
– Story of a missionary lad who served in England. Elders and the Mission President went to the city square to preach. Mission president had elder stand on char and sing a song. The elder said he did not know all the words. President said god will bless you. The lad said he sang the best he’d ever done. He did not miss a word. His voice carried for blocks from the square. It lured about 300 people to listen to the president speak.

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Big Tech vs. Freedom of Speech

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I went to a meeting about the increasing limits of free speech through social media. The following are my notes. Any inaccuracies are the fault of the note taker. The presenter is Thomas Butler: freedom activists. He started highland meeting 17 yrs. ago. He discusses big brother and the first amendments

    Conservatives are losing their voice on social media.

– A lot of conservative websites are losing their accounts and also losing their subscriber list. If you have a site: put all your contacts on a separate excel list. In case you lose yours online.
– Social media is beginning to restrict sites that the left disagrees with such as conservatives, anti-abortion or even warnings about vaccines. Such as Www.yourhelathfreedom.org > notifications of the dangers of vaccines. The twitter account is Yourthealtwisteut twitter.
– There is no free lunch.
– Why apps free. They’re sucking off info and they sell your info.
– Social media is geared to dehumanize you and make you stupid and to control you.
– Mark Zuckerberg mocked customers of Facebook. They trust me.
– Freedom of speech> documented in founding documents.
– The only rights we have are the rights we are willing to fight for.
– Deplorable means to be worthy of sensor or condemnations
– Do I have the right to say anything I want?
Political correctness:
– is the pursuer to language or measure that is intended offense or provide a disadvantage to people of disadvantage.
– 2000 bill Lynn article> be afraid that use the wrong word,
– Political correctness is cultural Marxism.
– Pc goes back to ww1 to classical Marxism. Both are botulism ideologies. It is now prominent in the college campus.
– How many of us self-censor ourselves. We’ve had 20 years of programming. We don’t want others to call us names.
– The constitution is geared to control the government.
– Hate speech becomes subjective.
– How to make a determination that what qualifies as hate speech. Open podium for the free exchange of ideas.
– Christ was open about calling the Pharisees hypocrites. He stood up against political correctness.
– “telling the truth is a revolutionary act”, George Orwell.
– Pop is asking for a one world government and a one world religion.
– The cashless society is here. Some countries are using chips (with bank accounts) instead of cash.

    The War in Heaven continues:

– Revelation 12:7-9, War in Heaven. https://www.biblegateway.com/passage/?search=Revelation+12%3A7-9&version=KJV
– War in heaven was over freedom, agency. It continues today
– We are in a war of ideas and principals.
– Christ did not worry about hurting Pharisees’ feelings.
– Freedom verse dominion or choice verses corhorision (sp).
– There are so many laws of county, state and federal that we are breakings laws and we don’t know it.
– Communication decently act section 230: Identifies a Corporation (such as Facebook) as a publisher. They could not be sued to be a town square as long as they don’t restrict speech. (https://www.eff.org/issues/cda230)
– 1949 jigsaw AL and town mobile al> case grace marsh> distribute religious literature. She was arrested. Right of citizen and private property can’t control other’s ability to communicate.
– You are either a public utility town square and you can be sued or you waive publisher and you can sensor anyway you want. And can be sued. Marshes of Alabama> source

    CIA funded up google and Facebook.

– How the CIA made google, article. http://www.americanchronicle.info/Home/TabId/514/ArticleId/36/how-the-cia-founded-and-funded-google.aspx
– Paul joseph watxon: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KlA4nQZma7E
– Multiple twitters accounts canceled due to being critical of the communist party. Ex: https://www.livetradingnews.com/china-and-twitter-113680.html#.XPugoFVKjcs
Sesame credit score system:
– Sesame credit is currently taking place in china.
– It gives you credit points by how good of a citizen you are. It is run by the company Tencent.
-https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lHcTKWiZ8sI
– https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N4Gr-HLM7Qk
– https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8py8fBI7wLY
Ten cent: https://www.theguardian.com/business/2018/jan/13/tencent-the-500bn-chinese-tech-firm-you-may-never-have-heard-of
– Video: live up to your word. Obey rules of communist party. 13.5 million Chinese are marked as untrustworthy.
– China says this is for stability.
– Think about the digital footprints you leave what you like, what message you share.
– Social platforms make it easier to praise or dislike. You can do it anomously.
– Alex Jones and Info wars were banned.
– Right wing watch> pushed for info wars to be closed.

    Mark Zuckerberg:

– said: we will remove people who are dangerous. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7qSwYfSNBOs
– Tucker> free speech crack down tucker Carlson.
– Web act for America>
– Candice Owens > black conservative restricted
– Lila rose > twitter deleted abortions
– Censorship is the last tool of tyrants dr. mckola.
– June 5 YouTube removed videos
– Steven Crowder> banned
– (not mentioned in the presentation) Barack Obama Revealed One Undercover Plan To Rig The 2020 Election Against Trump
https://www.americanpatriotdaily.com/featured/barack-obama-revealed-one-undercover-plan-to-rig-the-2020-election-against-trump/
– How google will rig the 2020 elections could not find it. Only found:
– https://www.politico.com/magazine/story/2015/08/how-google-could-rig-the-2016-election-121548
– Tucker: Big Tech is spying on you, addictive, has a patent
– https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lfN3xmJiDEc
– The power of big tech > tucker
– You wouldn’t believe what is actually happening > you tuber
– New America: quality act> takes freedom of religions and throw out of door.
– End game is to take away our agency and free will.
– There is a war on everything such as traditions, what is good, mother and father. Gender being biological instead of fluid, self-defense, family is bad. Carbo lifestyle. War on Christianity

    Proposed solutions:

– Have these media corporations to be broken up
– Pray for discernment from what sources to trust.
– Support correct principals rather than individuals
– Get off social medial> vote with $
– Find alternative media beyond those controlled by the extreme left:
– Instead of Google, try Duckduckgo,
– https://duckduckgo.com/?q=duckduckgo&atb=v134-1&ia=web.
– Google Alternative: 12 Best Search Engines to Use in 2019
https://beebom.com/google-alternatives/
– 13 Awesome Professional Networking Alternatives to LinkedIn
https://www.searchenginejournal.com/linkedin-alternatives/297409/
– Instead of Gmail try protaon mail or runbox.com protean mail
– 9 Gmail Alternatives For You
https://beebom.com/gmail-alternatives/
– Top 5 Twitter Alternatives You Must Try
https://beebom.com/twitter-alternatives/
– Melva’s idea: use the regular media if you want but post the exact same content at two other alternate media sources that are not controlled by the left. You get a following at all three. Research the ones you like. Then when people are kicked off, you already have a different means of communication. Conservatives re getting kicked off. Also, many democrats are being pushed away from their party for not agreeing with everything.

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When is Memorial Day mnemonic

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President Obama and I share similar challenges. We both have challenges remember if it is Labor Day or Memorial Day in May. I came up with the following mnemonic to help me remember. May is the month we celebrate the Military and thus Memorial Day. M+M+M. That might help me keep them separate. L for Labor Day is for Later in the year.

Do you have a better way to keep them separate? Please feel free to share if you do.

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Magic without a magic system

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These are notes I took from a wonderful writing symposium called Life, the Universe and Everything. We have a lot of talented people in Utah and visitors with a great deal of knowledge. Any Misinformation is the fault of the note taker.

– What is a magic system?
– Soft magic systems where the magic is not explained but the characters don’t really what it is either. Don’t allow the magic to solve things.
– Hard magic system: magic set into stone. Does not have to be explained. Here are the rules characters can do this and not that. The character knows and the reader knows. The magic does not solve the problem the person solves the problem using magic.
– Brandon Sanders universe is hard magic. Harry Potter is mid-hard to soft.
– Characters believed in magic but they’ve never seen it in their lives. Could be compared to the miracles in the bible such as the parting of the Red Sea by Moses. It is believed in but never seen in modern time.
– Bright glass series: the only fantastical element is an empath.
– The more obscure the magic the harder to define. Had to be clear cut rules and limits. She feels emotions. She learns how to use other people to feel emotions.
– What is the surest way to make a buss come > walk away from the bus stop and the bus comes could be considered magic?
– Gravity could be considered as magic. Throw something it will eventually drop.
– Even in non-magic systems, the character will still try to make sense of it.
– Authors are often tempted to over-explain. You need to trust that the reader will go with it.
Q: If don’t have a magic system, do you need rules?
– You just need to be consistent on your restrictions.
– When writing a series and you create something you need to justify why it wasn’t referenced/ used before.
– Some feel you don’t have to be consistent. For example, some thought the earth was the center of the earth. Then new facts came. But the understanding of the world changed by seeing the earth rotation around the sun.
– Read the 5th season series. The author feels one need to include magic that the characters and readers don’t understand. Include magic that defies expectations to maintain a sense of wonder.
– You need to think of your magic and the consequences of that magic. A shifter character takes on the form of a vampire and werewolf. He has ripped out all tension of the story. So had to put a limit such as the character could not change the body odor and that betrays the character.
– Melva: maybe certain conditions have to exist for a certain magic to exist or to work.
– Your character needs to be transformed from the beginning to the end of the book.
– When a series is being written the magic system tends to evolve.
– Magic in books are used to solve problems and they start using magic in ways it was not designed for. Like a cell phone where it no longer is used for calls but a lot of other things.
– Don’t rely upon your prolog to define your magic.

It is imperative to consider all costs, limitations; consequences of magic else there is no tension.
– Take a fairy tale> Cinderella. What is the cost of making her ball gowns, no cost of making the carriage? No other rule or limit in the magic other than to be home by 12.
– One author’s magic system is bone magic: use the bones of animals to gain animal abilities. You need to have the magic you create to serve the type of story you are creating. That way you can use your magic to its potential.
– You need to understand magic just enough to use. The direct proportion used to solve the problem and how much the reader needs to understand it. One does not know that you have to go into the lower orbit to slow down to rondiview with another ship. Don’t have to explain it.
– Story idea: The other side: the cost of godmother doing magic for Cinderella
– If magic is going to be used in a story it needs to be shown in the world to match for basic understanding.
– Less defined magic can create a sense of wonder for your audience. Well-Defined magic can ground the reader in your universe.
– Superheroes: readers need to know about power and limits.

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10 things to cover with listening

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Here is a presentation I gave at Toastmasters once.

– Make eye contact – She had a friend with hair not quite like Paige’s. Her hair covered her left eye. It drove Melva crazy because she couldn’t see both eyes. She wasn’t sure if she was looking at her.
– Distractions – Went to a movie and there was an ad about people driving a car. All of a sudden everybody’s phone rang. The next thing you hear is a car accident that startled everybody.
– Be Attentive and relaxed – Open to feedback and comments. Body language is not that she is open.
– Be Present and stay focused
– Keep an open mind – She keeps referring back to an incident when somebody sent out an email to all of her friends regarding Obamacare. She spent days researching every point and sent it back to her. What could have happened if we had an open dialogue and discussed it? There are some valid reasons that people should be able to have Obamacare, but there was no dialog.
– Never want to jump to conclusions –
– She was in a writer’s group. She was insecure. Her writer friends would talk over her. She was too shy to give her opinions
– When you listen, picture what the other person is talking about
– Concentrate even if it is boring
– Don’t interrupt
– An Interruption means, “I am more important than you” or “I don’t care what you have to say”.
– Wait for the speaker to pause to input your own comments.
– If you don’t understand ask.
– Ask questions to understand
– Try to feel what the speaker is feeling
– Put yourself in the other person’s shoes.

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Light Of Christ

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Here are some notes from a church meeting. Any inaccuracies is the fault of the note taker.

– Elder belong: come from the word radiance
– Brilliance and sense of direction
– Darkness cannot override even the smallest light
– it’s more than your conscience. When you have the desire to help someone that is the light of Christ.
– When you want to do good, it is the light of Christ.
– Light prompts us to do and be good
– As you follow prompting the light will grow within you
– If you disobey your light will fade
– D&C 50:54? He that receiveth light…
– Spirit of Christ
– Moroni7:16: the light of Christ is going to all man
– Light of Christ we all have
– Helps us decide what is wrong and wrong similar to conscience, enlightenment, lightening
– In the parable of the 10 virgins, the light can be compared to the light the Christ
– Let your light so shine
– Ephesian 6:13 put on the whole armor of God.
– The war in Heaven did not end it just extended to Earth.
– Some will read the script uses just to have peace.
– Like a bike light generator when you peddle to get light. Reading the scriptures and light our lives.
– Light of Christ and help with your life with the savior
– We are all called to serve. We can all share the light of Christ
– We are here to be tied and to be tested.
– Christ did not suffer just our sins but felt every moment of sorrow and pain associated with sin.
– You are making progress keep going. God sees all your progress. Your work is not in vain.
– Speaker said: when I was severely tested> my relationship with Christ increased

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Affordable Housing Summit, meeting notes

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I was informed of a meeting that discussed the housing shortage in Utah as well as all around the country. It was very enlightening and informative. It detailed the challenges of people not able to pay their rent.

This is a submission to my caucus corner occasional blog.

There is a whole range of efforts to assist with population growth. This meeting let me learn the wide range of groups working together to help people. It’s quite impressive.

We first heard a presentation of the challenges we face as a state and county. After the presentation, we heard from a panel of heads of government organizations. Those heads are geared to help people in need which is a lot of us.

Nonprofit advocate org Presentation:
– Geared to see that every Utah has an affordable place to live.
– Work with city councils and House of Representatives to pass good policy.
– What is affordable housing? No one should pay 30% of their gross income for where they live. Incomes may range from $700 salary to $10K.
– More people feel their income is not enough to cover their housing.
– Many are paying more than 50% of income for where they live. Transportation takes about 20% of income. It may cost more if it is unstable transportation. There is not much remaining income much left if over the 30 and 20%.
– Low income or affordable housing needs are often from those of the service industry. These include teachers, police officers of our communities. They are searching for housing that matches their wages.
– Some needs are from people who need government assistance.
– The 30% of income for housing are added upon to include utilities and HOA fees.
– Family of four has an income between a range of $24K range to $45.
– Apartments who ask for additional fees is not part of the 30% income but adds to it.
– Utah has about 61K low-income renters.
– 85% are cost burdened pay over 30% or 45% toward housing.
– 67% is severely cost burdened. Thus they can’t be fully involved in the community outside of paying for their home. That means they are limited on eating out or other entertainments. they can’t support local business.
– It is expensive to build housing.
– We have inconsistent philosophies on how to fix housing.
– Need to find a Utah based values solution.
– Housing initiative is often driven by other policy goals. Such as transportation influence each other.

    Sb34b bill

– Concentrates on housing affordability.
– It comprises a diverse group is gathered to find solutions to discuss land use, rural voices. They discuss challenges and define solutions.
– This bill works on correlating house development and transportation together in community development. This bill requires cities to plan their cities for an increased population.
– Cities need to work with teachers and health agencies. All of them need to have input on housing conversations.
– The number of low-income renters increasing rapidly.
– Builders find challenges to pay for low-income housing due to the cost.
– If families have to move around to find an affordable home, it causes students to move from school to school. Thus it causes havoc for the teachers.
– Long term needs: people with disabilities and an increase of seniors face homelessness due to their fixed income.
– The bill needs to plan for low to med and high salary funding. Cities need to think long term and a proactively.
– 61A% of people in the US say they have had to make at least one (financial) sacrifice because they struggle to pay for housing. Health care and food for examples of things they go without.
– Some have to take on an additional lob. Have to work 98 hrs. a week to afford housing.
– May have to skip a rent payment or not pay a bill
– How housing affects school, roads and affecting other parts of the communities.
– What happens if we rely upon fed funds? Utah works very much to not rely on the government. The federal government provides tax credits.
– Senator Hatch supported federal housing credit. Many relied upon federal help.

    HUD is an organization to help low income.

– Many people are on a fixed income.
– Utility rates are increasing.
– As prices increase for everything the wages stay the same.
– Counties of the north have louder voices. they get more of the legislative attention. Those further south don’t get as much attention.
– This is not just a Wasatch issue.
– Need rural and all parts of the state to have these needs addressed.
– Many builders complain that there are zoning restrictions that prevent them from building.
– Subsidized housing: what % is covered by federal housing? HUD subsidizes existing units, many of which are senior housing.
– Mondey(sp) from state contributed toward low-income housing. Much of it is paid by tax credit. Private investors who need a tax break to build these units.
– The last population senses was done in 2010. HUD is using that last senses to define rent help.
– Maybe define a rent cap. In other areas may be defined by the city.

Here are comments from the panel:

    Karen: exec dir. of community action.

– Work with those who are at the lower end of the spectrum.
– Help find housing and seek funding sources.
– The LDS church gives a grant for emergency housing to budging hotels for the homeless. Such as the location is about 300 South. Money is used to help with the homeless.
– They may connect people of need to a host family.
– Repay rehousing funds> get into housing and money for deposit and rent.
– Agency money helps with emergency housings.
– Provide permeant housings for singles.
– We support a diverse population. Some for singles or temporary assistance for those who have kids. Also, do food bank. Community garden and a community kitchen.
– Name??: special projects manager for Provo housing authority:
– The organization covers subsidies.
– 950 units are subsidized.
– We broadened support from Provo to all around Utah County.
– Nonprofit arms for Utah regional housing.
– We have a bunch of tax credit projects. Skyline is a place for homeless housing. Travelers is a new place for the homeless.
– We got a homeless grant.
– Land trust: trying to get more affordable units for people.
– Five units in American fork.
– Looking to set up a place for people who have autism to help them and also provide wrap-around services.

    Bill Street: works with commercial real estate.

– He shares a personal experience. Son and wife with four kids live in a two-bedroom home.
– We need to have housing affordability across the spectrum. The range stretches from seniors to first-time homeowners.

    Jason bench: long-range plans of growth of the city. Provo?

– Works on general plans and master plans.
– Modern income study is required as an annual report. Looks at challenges that Orem faces. They have seven recommendations. Can include zoning and education.
– 70% of the population coming from growth are from within the state (kids who are now adults). They are our children and grandchildren.
– Only 30% of population growth is from out of state.

    Brad Bishop: self-help homes:

– Work with agriculture development.
– Have a federal mortgage set aside for rural areas.
– Provide opportunities for mutual self-help.
– Have eight families work together to build each other’s homes as a group. Using sweat equity to build each other’s homes.

Comments from the panel:
– One former homeless person had $600 rent. In one year their landlord raised it to $850.
– A lot more of the elderly are coming into the agency. They are coming in to get food. With more of their limited being directed to housings, they have less money for medical and food.
– Special needs also need a place to live.
– There are also those who have come out of incarnation. One man wanted to reunite with his children and start over. Landlords are reluctant to rent to people with criminal records. He wanted to turn his life around.
– When you have families send more than 50% on hosing. They can’t pay bills or rent. It involves an elementary child that moves from one school to another.

    Vouchers:

– The waiting list for housing choice voucher range from 1.5 yrs. a yr. senior housing wait time is 4-6 mo.
– We only have a thousand vouchers. We can’t give out more until people move on from the need we’ve offered. We don’t have more.
– People come in and want to be prioritized because they are in crisis. We can’t move them up the line because those already on the program are also in crisis.
– 30% of gross income prior to tax withdraw. Get deductions for out of pocket child care or for senior for medical deductions credit.

    Housing conditions:

– Many neighbors are doubled up in households. They are looking for places to live. We need to create competition for housing.
– Families are paying $1200 rent. Using energy star to help keep utilizes lower.
– The average size of a home has tripled and has smaller families.
– One challenge is one half of an acer of property cost $ 1.3 million.
– Many of the people in the service sector are in need to help assistance. These include police, firemen, teachers, and seniors.
– Student housing: many students are working 2-3 jobs for housings, living, and school.
– Ask student do you have debt. They say no. and then ask do you have a student loan. Yes. They don’t see a 100 k loan as debt.
– Apartments: adding a bunch of fees.
– Predatory pricing> rates will go up 10% for no added value or enhancement or added value. This predatory behavior is really damaging our communities. The whole nature of the contract system is overweighed to the owner’s advantage.
– Other countries have put in limits but not here in use because of free enterprise.
– Provo city raised impact fees ty 82% (Impact fees are utilities, parks and police services. This increase is specific to real estate. They contribute to the maintenance of roads.
– 50% are senior or disabled. 775 a mo.

    City and realtor challenges:

– Easier for organizations to buy existing properties and modify
– Many cities have a minimum housing size of 800 feet.
– We need to have a say for all to have decent, safe, and sanitary housing.
– Citizens are pushing back on cities building counsel wanting to have smaller homes. They want bigger homes. People may feel that they create a slum attitude.
– Meeting with development: look at ways for housings to include parking needs.
– There are more households then homes available. Apartment owners don’t have the incentive to set aside units for voucher people. they can get other renters.
– By 2040 we should double in population size.
– By next yr. colleges will have 40K students. `

    Solution efforts:

– Accessory housing: another unit in your home a small apartment. City zoning is restricting renting out the basement.
– When establishing a private and public partnership. Mix community and developer agree that if you have 20% for the low income you can have high density.
– Redevelop older communities to revitalize the community.
– Sometimes people on vouchers: some may be motivated to not change so they lose their benefits.
– Have programs to motivate people to get out of their situation.
– Suggestion to builders to include some low-income homes in part of their complex.

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Spelling Catastrophe

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Good: Catastrophe
Bad: catrophy

This is a bad comparison but it might work. A catastrophe is a bad event that is so bad it beats all other bad events but be careful of the spelling. Listen for the sound of the letter E at the end.

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Young but interesting protagonists

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These are notes I took from a wonderful writing symposium called Life, the Universe and Everything. We have a lot of talented people in Utah and visitors with a great deal of knowledge. Any Misinformation is the fault of the note taker.

– Captain underpants film seems to meet the appropriate age. The big issue will be put in different classes.
– Middle school: when you embarrassing yourself before the boy that you like.
– Language is influenced by your readership.
– Kill a mocking bird is a story about a young protectionist but it’s geared for an adult reader.
– The filter your character sees through creates the book. Middle grade almost everything is discovery. The first time to the zoo. YA: is disillusionment.
– Publishers positions books in a certain area
– Endor’s game is considered a YA
– If your writing to publish traditionally> everyone has to know where your book will be placed.
– If you are writing middle grade are you targeting a 5th grader if you write YA do you target an 11th grader.
– If you shine the light of your story on emotions that adults and kids can relate to.
– YA sales are struggling?
– Lion King: is a kid’s story. Deaf of a parent and couched in a language kids can relate to.
– For cinema want the whole family to come and see the move. For TV, the shows are more age specific.
– Picture Book needs a good story and a good character. 6 yr. old read’s baby talk but don’t talk baby talk. Check out the school curriculum. See what spelling words or subjects covered in school to match content in the book.
– Many parents buy books for kids who read higher than their age.
– How make characters readers will connect?
– Much stiff is driven by emotion.it can build the empathy factor but readers can relate or understand the emotion of the character. Someone will be able to relate to someone in her book.
– Book called after. A teen who is a mom and left a baby in a trash can. Book went into depth of motivations of the teen girl.
– Hunger games> sympathy because she takes her young sisters place. That is the motive.
– Screenwriting book: save the cat. Your protagonist does a good deed like save a cat. The movie the Incredibles dad saved the cat as a joke on that book.
– Have the character follows his heart.
– A character needs a redeeming trait such as being competent, caring, or kind. Find a trait.
– In the TV series, House the character is very competent but has a lot of other bad traits.
– What does a character face by way of challenge that makes the reader root for him?
– Talking out loud can help dialog sound realistic and can help with the flow. It lets you figure out the plot.
– How to train your dragon; wants to kill a dragon to get his father to accept him. Then his want is in conflict as he comes to care for the dragon.
– To have the reader care about the character: have the reader discover things about the character they did not expect.
– Write true to your characters and write in a consistent voice.
– More are more likely you sell a two book or three book series and may become more only if there are a lot of sales.
– Middle grade usually is written from 3rd person because kids don’t have a self-filter.
– Stuck in neutral: is a story about a kid is a vegetable. He can’t move.
– Give your audience something familiar> family and school and then serial killer he sees his perspective. Then add familiar with the unfamiliar such as a Serial killer or authorism. Characters have rules and coping mechanism to address their situation.

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